Beowulf & Harry Potter
As everyone hailed to the greatest
hero of all, Beowulf; he has defeated every blood thirsty and revengeful
monster. During the Anglo-Saxon era, the great epic story of Beowulf was pasted down from generation
to generation, creating the most heroic story of the century. This classic hero
has abnormal powers and ultimately fights evil. Similar to a modern film/book Harry Potter, one of many modern heroes,
he also fights the evil and puts himself before anyone else. Three literary
techniques that both involve Beowulf and Harry Potter are the hero’s
characterization, the themes and the imagery in the context. Both of these
characters have similar motive and heroic characteristics in themselves.
Beowulf was simply a tragic hero
who he died with courage and bravery. The author of Beowulf characterized him as a courageous man with mysterious abnormal
powers, similar to Harry Potter who is a wizard that holds a source of power in
his wand. They were both “special”; stood out from their peers, Beowulf was
described as a savior and the “only hope,” and Harry Potter was known as the
“chosen one.” The side characters always looked up to them and treated them with
respect and honor: Beowulf, the companions and Hrothgar and Harry Potter, his
friends and few professors. The difference between the two characters would be
the fact Beowulf shows greatness on the outside. He tries to show up to people
who believe he can’t do it. During, the fight with the dragon, Beowulf tells
his companion to step aside and watch. On the other hand our modern hero, Harry
Potter is more humble and does not boost about his fame and bravery. Both heroes
are different in their ways, but what makes them heroes is the characterization
of each character’s action such as their efforts to defeat the evil.
What makes Beowulf and Harry Potter heroic stories is the fight between good versus evil. In Beowulf, he fought Grendel and his mother, and in Harry Potter, he fought Voldemort and home of his classmates in Slytherin. There were some success and failures in both stories. In Beowulf, he was defeated and killed by Grendel’s mother. In Harry Potter, Voldemort was not defeated until the end of the series, but along the way he has defeated other enemies. Another theme that was in both books was isolated/solo. Harry always saved his friends and put himself before everyone else, but he was all by himself. His good friends Hermione and Ron were there but never all the way. In Beowulf did not have any “friends,” but the companions would observe while Beowulf fought the monsters. Beowulf and Harry Potter seem to be both reliable by other company.
What makes Beowulf and Harry Potter heroic stories is the fight between good versus evil. In Beowulf, he fought Grendel and his mother, and in Harry Potter, he fought Voldemort and home of his classmates in Slytherin. There were some success and failures in both stories. In Beowulf, he was defeated and killed by Grendel’s mother. In Harry Potter, Voldemort was not defeated until the end of the series, but along the way he has defeated other enemies. Another theme that was in both books was isolated/solo. Harry always saved his friends and put himself before everyone else, but he was all by himself. His good friends Hermione and Ron were there but never all the way. In Beowulf did not have any “friends,” but the companions would observe while Beowulf fought the monsters. Beowulf and Harry Potter seem to be both reliable by other company.
Beowulf and Harry Potter involve fantasy and mystical creatures, but the difference between a classic and modern literature is the usage of imagery. In Beowulf, they seem to focus mainly on Beowulf’s success and never his failure. His success was expressed deeply, “quoth that of all the kings of earth, of men he was mildest and most beloved, to his kin the kindest, keenest for praise..” He rarely had any suspicions about his powers or no detail of his past was mentioned in the story. Ultimately, the tale empowered his greatness, even after his death. In Harry Potter, the difference was that it evolved around his past and mistakes he did in Hogwarts. There was imagery in the dialogues between characters, “The world is not split into good people and Death Eaters. We have all got both light and dark inside us. What matters is the power we choose to act on. That’s who we really are,” Sirius Black. The imagery used in both books allows these stories to become more realistic and serious rather than a typical hero in a children’s book.
The classic tale of Beowulf is evolved in to many of the modern films and literature today. The classic “superheroes” all share a similarity with Beowulf. Especially in the book, Harry Potter, Potter was one of the heroes that were no ordinary human being and neither was Beowulf. Both Harry Potter and Beowulf possessed a mysterious power that was never fully explained, but they are known as great heroes because of their defeat of evil and bravery. The classic tale of Beowulf was the bases of heroic tales; in modern books you can see parts of classic hero tales in Harry Potter. What creates a hero is ultimately the situation and the actions that makes a character heroic, as Harry said, "I don't go looking for trouble. Trouble usually finds me."
You have really good examples to support your thesis. I especially like the contextual examples that you used. I would just recommend rereading your first paragraph because there were a couple of grammar mistakes. Other than that, nicely done Miki.
ReplyDeleteThanks Melissa! I probably should have proof read my essay before posting it.
DeleteI focused my essay on Harry Potter versus Beowulf too; I really like your different perspective on the comparison. There are some key factors that I overlooked and you included, so nice job!Like Melissa, I only really spotted grammatical errors.
ReplyDeleteThank you Brenna! I noticed how our essays were both Harry Potter versus Beowulf, yet we have different literary techniques and examples. I will fix those errors. :)
DeleteI really like your approach to this essay and found it all to be very interesting and well written. I agree with the other comments about making sure to proof read your essay to fix the grammar mistakes.
ReplyDeleteThanks Micaela! Sometimes I type my thoughts down so fast that I misspell words and make grammar mistakes.
DeleteI enjoyed your essay, I would have to agree with the others' and go back to fix the grammar mistakes. Also, I like the evidence you have to support your essay.
ReplyDeleteThanks Caroline, I will definitely fix all the grammar errors and proofread!
DeleteI really liked how you analyzed a lot of the aspects of Harry and Beowulf which all supported your thesis. I liked your use of quotes as well!
ReplyDeleteHowever, you already know there some grammatical errors based on previous comments, but what stood out most to me were the odd sentence or two that were just worded strange because of incorrect verb use.
Thanks Lindsey! The quotes were hard but fun to find. Thanks for your comment!
DeleteGood job Miki! I really liked your essay and comparing Beowulf to Harry Potter was a really good idea! You had good textual examples and including literary devices. I also liked how you began and ended your essay with quotes, I think it ties everything together really well.
ReplyDeleteI would just proof read more carefully before you post a final version but altogether the content was good!
I will definitely proofread more carefully. Thanks for your input! I enjoyed looking for the quotes myself! :)
DeleteI really liked how you chose to compare Harry Potter and Beowulf, I never even thought of this until now! The evidence used to support all your points were spot on too. Having said that, I would just fix the grammatical errors that the other comments have pointed out and you have yourself a great essay!
ReplyDeleteThanks for your comment Rachel! Yes, I do need to fix the grammar errors. :)
DeleteI am impressed by the amount of quotes you used to support your thesis. I imagine it must have been tedious to search throughout all seven novels to find the ones that were just prefect for your essay. Good job.
ReplyDeleteYou also managed to identify literary devices without bluntly pointing them out.
Thanks Bianca! It actually didn't take that long because I had an idea of which quote to use so I just had to look for it! Thanks for your input! :)
DeleteNicely done, you did a good job with putting your own spin on the thesis, like Rachel i would have never suspected harry potter, but you put so much contextual evidence in so it was hard to disagree! However the flow of your writing near the end of the thesis sounds canned out, it lacked a flow of sorts, but that's hardly conclusive reason for revision. Excellent work!
ReplyDeleteThanks Jake! I did get a little sloppy and lazy at the end of my essay. Harry Potter is a great modern hero! :)
DeleteHey Miki!
ReplyDeleteI fancy the fact that you used Harry Potter as your comparison hero, it's nice to see a change in heroes! As said earlier there were some grammatical errors, but I still had fun reading your essay. ALSO, your thesis was easy to spot, which made reading the rest of your essay easier. You did a great job on analyzing your examples too, as to just stating them and not giving an explanation. OVERALL, an essay well done (:
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DeleteMiranda! I'm glad you had fun reading my essay! I will fix my mistakes! I appreciate you taking your time to read my essay so thank you Miranda!
DeleteMiki, your literary techniques that you included were very creative. As for corrections, I would suggest changing adding "their" to the third to last sentence of your essay so that it reads "they are known as great heroes because of their defeat of evil and (their) bravery." I feel like this way it doesn't sound as if they defeat both evil and bravery. I thought you did an excellent job choosing and inserting the quotes that you did for the textual examples.
ReplyDeleteHey Allyson! Thanks for pointing out a grammar mistake! That really helps a lot! Anyway, thanks again for your input and commenting on my essay!
DeleteI liked your ideas Miki. Very creative. Your thesis was strong and your opening paragraph was a good preview of what was to come. You essentially caught my eye. Good job :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Izamar! I love your comment, it made me feel better about my essay. Was there something I needed to fix besides the grammatical errors? Thanks Izamar! :)
DeleteFirst of all, I LOVE the extensive comment conversation! This is a great way to share feedback and think about how to improve our writing. I agree with the majority about your style and use of evidence. My only suggestion for the moment is that you provide more prompt-related context for your thesis in the first 1-2 paragraphs. Keep up the great work, and thanks for your reflective responses to the commentators!
ReplyDeleteThanks Dr. Preston! I was surprised myself to see many comments on my essay so I felt like I had to thank everyone, including you! Now that I read the essay prompt again, I noticed that I completely missed the "symbol of the times in which both were created." <-- Is that what you are referring to?
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